My attempt at this Paper!

Ok so I started writing my paper and I have no clue if what i'm writing makes any sense or if i'm doing it right. It took me a while to actually get going with it, i had no clue how to start it off. After i did I was able to write but I have only been describing Finders and Ewens stories and how their different. I don't even know if is even right with the paper assignment. I hope I will get some good feed back from mr. mahoney.