2nd Response to Literacy Paper

I think I finally know how to set up my paper! In choosing to write about the Ewens and Finders essays, I decided to dissect how Finders and Ewens provide a reader with two completely different languages in literature; two different writing styles, images vs. improper language today. For example, my paper is going to be set up like Ewens and Finders, my first paragraph is a quotation of how teengers talk such as "Hey, what's up gurl..hit me up later tonight!" and from there I produce my introductory paragraph. Then I will write a short short within my essay like Ewens does, such as: John Smith looked outside his small opaque cottage window, with a cup of joe in hand, reading the daily news sports section, the same thing he does every early Sunday morning. Therefore in my paper, I am going to discuss language in the eyes of teenagers effecting society creating a new language to literacy, and how colorful imagery in Finders essay shapes society in its own form, language, and culture. Both of these languages, I will conclude to be very similar yet different at best.