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Both essays had much meaning behind them. The way in which the they were written may have made readers skip over the importance of Tame a Wild Tongue. In "tame" there are many parts of the text in which the author rattles of whole sentences in spanish and sometimes a paragraph. This makes reading the paper hard and the audience might not know what she is talking about. But that is the point. This language barrier is how she lives everyday of her life and by throwing in a language most of us can not understand is shows us the difficulty. The second essay about highschool is more to the point about being well rounded. The way in which it was written allows most readers to comprehend easily and that may make us gravitate towards the conclusion that this was a more well written essay.