Hey all...As we talked about in class, the move we are going to make next is to do some radical revisions of your narratives. Just to review: I want you to choose one paragraph in the middle of your narrative that you find interesting, engaging, or that you simply like. I want you to use that paragraph as the first paragraph of a "new" narrative. That is, instead of having an introductory paragraph, the paragraph you choose will be your first paragraph.
I want you to resist editing the paragraph to make is sound more like an introduction. It's a bonus if your reader does not understand the whole context. Remember, we are starting your narrative from a different point of departure. You should have ~2 pages of text written for Tuesday's class.
In the meantime, post the paragraph you chose here as a comment to this entry. I look forward to seeing what you chose!
K
Friday, September 07, 2007
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